Mr. Darcy’s Family Affairs
Book One · Beta edition
Marry within eight weeks, or lose Pemberley to George Wickham. The one woman he’d like to ask is still telling Meryton he called her tolerable.
This is the first half of the book — and you’ll get to read the rest soon.
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Mr. Darcy’s Family Affairs
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A Pride and Prejudice Variation
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Fitzwilliam Darcy has brought his sister to Netherfield for a quiet autumn after Ramsgate. Then a letter arrives from his late father’s solicitor, enclosing a provision Darcy has never seen: should he remain unmarried at eight-and-twenty, the estate passes to George Wickham. Beneath it, under his father’s seal, is the reason — and the reason has just been quartered in Meryton with the militia.
Elizabeth Bennet, meanwhile, is still making a very good story of being pronounced merely tolerable across a crowded assembly room — and a sympathetic friend of the charming Mr. Wickham. But when Jane falls ill at Netherfield and Elizabeth walks through the mud to nurse her, she finds a house keeping its own counsel: a shy sister Mr. Wickham believes is safely at Pemberley, a proud man who turns unexpectedly gentle whenever that sister is near, and a letter, handed to Elizabeth at the side gate by a stranger, that Mr. Darcy receives as though it were dangerous.
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